Benj,
We’ll take you at your word that you mean well so take it that I mean well when I tell you that you are doing this wrong. Long expository pieces are not to be posted in line except for very unusual circumstances. Think of it as a courtesy to our host who is paying for the bandwidth. Look at how other people do this. Try this; a proposition or comment, followed by a short list of bullet points. Then have an example or three to make a point and a conclusion. A link or two may be included to other material referenced or recommended. If you do that method people will engage your arguments. You may make a point or change someone’s opinion. At least you will build respect for yourself or your community from those who disagree with you on an issue. Any post that is wordier than this one (honestly I am pushing the limit myself) is likely to be ignored. Yes, I have violated this principle myself and regretted it.