I would have appreciated this kind of critiquing in the first post you presented. By writing what you did you left it up to me to decipher your full meaning, which you have explained much better here.
Page load times for people on dialup may be a problem but I really think that’s hardly the issue since you have chosen, instead, to critique the content of my lack of literary skill and the length of my posts. Perhaps more proofreading on my part is in order. But then, again, it’s stream-of-consciousness and I’m guessing, based on your assessment that my consciousness is a matter of some critiquing as well.
Brevity may be the soul of wit. But then, I have never tried to be witty. My verbosity has been praised by others. I’m sorry you don’t care for it. I’m also sorry that you think I’m trying to prove that I’m more intelligent than I really am. That smacks of pomposity on your part.
I am not the smartest guy around. Nor am I the stupidest. My opinion of myself is not that high, nor is it very low. But, you have successfully squelched me. You’re right. No one needs to read what I think. Thanks for pointing that out. Were it not for the overwhelming number of superiors that I have, including you, then..well…I guess I would have more to say.
I truly appreciate your help.





